Thursday, March 24, 2011

Freedom To Be!


Free
as the bird in the blinding blue sky,
the vastness of the huge horizon
only edging it to fly further,
higher following the song of its heart.

Free
to be, to want, to do
as the meandering mind thought,
as the winding ways of the soul dictated
without disdain, hesitation.

Freedom
to be Me,
to love,
to hug another soul
to fly high, to identify with creation.


13 comments:

Raajii said...

very well done :-)

Hopehayuk said...

ah...to be free. Beautifully done!

I have given you an award over at my place if you would like it :)

Gayatri said...

Shail ji ,its a beautiful woven lyrical ode to a soul(a woman's I would presume) awaiting to exhale.ah,the sweet scent of freedom and the forbidden fruit to be yourself - unconditionally.lovely poem . cheers,Gayatri

Kim said...

We are lucky, we who are so free.

Tanya said...

This is wonderful. I too used the word vastness in my post. I will be coming back to check in again. :)

Inquisitives09 said...

Beautifully written....

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Thanks Aankeet. Nice you liked the poem.

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Thanks Tanya. Nice that you liked the poem and also shared the same word in your work. Do keep visiting. Would love it...

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

I agree Kim. We are blessed but don't always realize it.

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Yes dear Gayatri, indeed to a woman's soul but could apply to a man's soul too since it is mainly about the freedom of the soul which in reality is neither male nor female.

Nice you liked the poem.

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Dear Hope,

So very sweet of you. Nice you liked the poem.

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Thanks Raajii. Nice you liked the verse.

Hari said...

Nice one Shail.