My dreams
conjure up images
reflecting
latent desires
in my subconscious mind
as they tussle
with one another
to transform
into a probable reality.
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My visions
for the future
indescribable,
unrelated
to the unconnected visuals
that hastily appear
and craftily disappear
before the unclear screen
of my unsettling mind.
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My reveries
play games
showing me places
I cannot go,
persons I cannot meet,
goals I cannot reach.
They revel
in their power
to twist, twirl and turn me around.
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Poetry Potluck: Dreams, Visions, Reveries



lovely writing! mine's here- http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/01/15/head/
ReplyDeletethoughtful writing, my dear poetess.
ReplyDeletewell done,
A++
Award/Treats 4 Poetic Friends of Jingle, Happy Thursday!
ReplyDeletesee you on week 14.
if you prepare on Saturday evening or Sunday morning, link it up as soon as we are open, you may get better feedback!
best wishes!
Hi Shail,
ReplyDeleteI like this one, especially ur words on My visions.
Hari
Thanks Five Loaf.
ReplyDeleteAh ha! Thanks Jingle. The appreciation is appreciated!!
ReplyDeleteHi Hari,
ReplyDeleteThanks. I feel good that you enjoyed reading the lines in the poem. Hoping to keep you engaged in the future too.
Jingle, by the way, I liked your line, 'my dear poetess..'
ReplyDeleteThanks.