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13 comments:

  1. I write 4 uFebruary 1, 2011 at 2:52 AM

    "portray a history
    unknown, hidden,
    forgotten."...lovely and true about bricks...Nice

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  2. KatherineFebruary 1, 2011 at 8:32 AM

    Beautiful poem. I love how you made a profound piece out of something as simple as a brick :)

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  3. BeyniazFebruary 3, 2011 at 1:41 AM

    Nice poem...unusual.
    Enjoyed reading it.

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  4. Shernaz WadiaFebruary 3, 2011 at 1:44 AM

    Beautiful poem, Shail. You most certainly have a poet's eyes and heart, to be able to see the exraordinary hidden behind the most mundane.

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  5. ShailraghuvanshiFebruary 3, 2011 at 1:58 AM

    Thanks Beyni. The prompt was such. And writing about this theme was a challenge.

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  6. ShailraghuvanshiFebruary 3, 2011 at 1:59 AM

    Thanks Shernaz. Nice you liked it. Had no way out but put on the poet's goggles on and find verse in bricks....

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  7. Kumarendra MallickFebruary 3, 2011 at 7:33 AM

    Brick has many connotations, starting from very ancient to present, is a witness to history, to civilisation, to prosperity or lack of it and many more. Nice composition, Shaili.

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  8. Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis HallFebruary 3, 2011 at 3:27 PM

    love the flow.

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  9. BhargaviFebruary 4, 2011 at 7:29 AM

    Shail,
    Bricks lie ignored like unsatisfied desire left to rot..
    How true...!

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  10. Shail RaghuvanshiJune 17, 2011 at 7:38 AM

    Thanks Helena. Great you liked the verse.

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  11. Shail RaghuvanshiJune 17, 2011 at 7:38 AM

    Thanks dear Geeta. That's quite flattering...

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  12. becca givensJune 19, 2011 at 5:12 PM

    I love old bricks ... interesting history if they could speak!!

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  13. Shail RaghuvanshiJuly 2, 2011 at 11:30 AM

    Yeah, truly. What history, what stories they would have to tell to us. Just imagine!

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