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Saturday, November 6, 2010

Pause -The Magic Moment!



She paused as he approached her
slowly taking her soft gentle hand
in his strong embracing one
to clasp forever.....

He paused as she walked towards him
hesitatingly,
she came up to him and gave him her hand
standing on her toes to give him the kiss of life....

Mother paused one last time
before she gazed gently at me
enveloping me in her warmth
and then, let go...

Pause- the magical moment between reflection and deed.

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21 comments:

  1. gautami tripathyNovember 7, 2010 at 1:37 AM

    Touched by it...

    nothingness

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  2. Shail RaghuvanshiNovember 7, 2010 at 2:24 AM

    Thanks Gauthami....

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  3. AnonymousNovember 7, 2010 at 3:13 AM

    "Pause- the magical moment between reflection and deed." An excellent definition indeed!

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  4. Ramesh SoodNovember 7, 2010 at 3:28 AM

    This is pretty heart warming.. liked it, Shail..

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  5. AnonymousNovember 7, 2010 at 4:42 AM

    What a touching poem! So very nice.

    Teresa

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  6. HopeNovember 7, 2010 at 7:51 AM

    i love it! very touching
    thank you

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  7. AnonymousNovember 7, 2010 at 8:39 AM

    you nailed it.
    love the imagery.

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  8. Harshad MehtaNovember 7, 2010 at 9:04 AM

    Well caught the moments.

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  9. ReflectionsNovember 7, 2010 at 11:53 AM

    Wonderful imagery enhancing those magic moments.

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  10. AnonymousNovember 7, 2010 at 2:52 PM

    Heart felt measurment of time. Impressed.

    Please have a good new week.

    daily athens

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  11. Just Another Observer...November 8, 2010 at 5:05 AM

    shorter,sweeter and more emphatic than what the quantum of words convey...Amazing piece...:)

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  12. Geraldine November 8, 2010 at 9:57 AM

    A beautiful love poem, unique!

    www.mypoeticpath.wordpress.com
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  13. Shail RaghuvanshiNovember 8, 2010 at 8:58 PM

    Thanks James. Nice that you liked that definition of pause. Pause is like that...

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  14. Shail RaghuvanshiNovember 8, 2010 at 9:01 PM

    Thanks Ramesh. Nice that you enjoyed the poem. Yours was nice too....

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  15. Shail RaghuvanshiNovember 8, 2010 at 9:04 PM

    Thanks Teresa. Nice that you loved the composition....

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  16. Shail RaghuvanshiNovember 8, 2010 at 9:08 PM

    Thanks Hope. I look forward to your lovely comments:)

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  17. Shail RaghuvanshiNovember 8, 2010 at 9:41 PM

    Thanks Jingle. Your poetry and blogs are inspiring...

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  18. Shail RaghuvanshiDecember 21, 2010 at 10:17 PM

    Thanks Hope. I look forward to your lovely comments:)

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  19. Shail RaghuvanshiDecember 21, 2010 at 10:17 PM

    you nailed it.
    love the imagery.

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  20. Shail RaghuvanshiDecember 21, 2010 at 10:17 PM

    "Pause- the magical moment between reflection and deed." An excellent definition indeed!

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  21. Shail RaghuvanshiDecember 21, 2010 at 10:17 PM

    shorter,sweeter and more emphatic than what the quantum of words convey...Amazing piece...:)

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