Part of the cosmos
I lie untended to
like all creation-
plants, creatures and all.
Or, is it my innate ego
prompting me
to arrogantly presume
that this hi-fi adult
needs attention?
Isn't creation
alive and kicking
working diligently
without any aid
from
I, Me, Myself?
from
I, Me, Myself?
I liked it Shail... Its so beautifully self realising... I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing..
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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you open my eyes,
ReplyDeletewhat a creative and theme related entry.
masterful job!
Thanks for flying with potluck poetry.
Happy Wednesday!
AWESOME!! Little do we realize that we are but a part of this vast creation, and that everything has equal importance here!
ReplyDeleteReally beautifully written, Shail!! Hats off to you on this one!
Interesting relaisation..!
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So beautiful, thank you for sharing! Enjoyed the words very much!
ReplyDeleteProfoundly wise.
ReplyDeleteVery thought provoking Shail!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch for sharing this one.. :)
Love xox
Very thought provoking Shail!!
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch for sharing this one.. :)
Love xox
Potluck week 12 awards/treats, Enjoy
ReplyDeleteHappy Friday!
See you next time
you open my eyes,
ReplyDeletewhat a creative and theme related entry.
masterful job!
Thanks for flying with potluck poetry.
Happy Wednesday!