A TREASURE CHEST OF POETRY MUSINGS
Shail,welcome to one shot!Am new there too so I love to know other newcomers,too.They say our destinies are already written.But deep inside I would like to believe we have a hold on our destinies.Had a good read.Looking forward to seeing you more at one shot!
Hi June, so good to see you here! Yes, I do believe that God helps those who help themselves. There is no point in believing in destiny helplessly. But this said, I also believe in the law of karma.Yes, I hope to be around here regularly. I just have to remember that I have to post a poem every Tuesday or Wednesday at One Shot.Right?
nice one shot. i think there is a certain uncomfortableness that is good. that God can use to help us find the way...you did a nice job of making me feel the interior of ones mind in this...
Ah, the eternal quest for wisdom. Nice One Shot. Welcome!Thank you for visiting my blog. I really appreciate it.
Thank you Brian. It feels good when someone is able to understand the poem for what it stands for...
Thanks Patti. I am glad you liked my first One Shot.Hope to see more of you....
Dear ShailVery nice way to seek out the guidance.. slowly you brought out reason for this verse.. I enjoyed it.ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah ShivayaTwitter: @VerseEveryDayBlog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Hi Shashi. Glad you enjoyed reading this piece of poetry. Hope to see more of you here....
Ofcourse.. ॐ नमः शिवायOm Namah Shivaya
Ah! Waiting for Godot!Life of Indian Womanhood...
I really like the lines: cobwebs of ingnorance, dust of arrogance,...and once we clear those away then God can show us the Way..wonderful one shot!
Wonderful lines...esp.Cobwebs of ignorance,dust of arrogance lie untouchedEnjoyed it
VERY NICELY DONEwe don't always know the way do we - and that fog keeps us going in circlesNice One ShotThanks from the Moon
Love this piece, search for the eternal wisdom, the destiny of our lives...
Shail,Your One Shot is really beautiful. I often wonder why I can't see beyond the fog of life as well. Great job. :) Kristen
V beautiful, indeed!
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