Saturday, November 6, 2010

Pause -The Magic Moment!



She paused as he approached her
slowly taking her soft gentle hand
in his strong embracing one
to clasp forever.....

He paused as she walked towards him
hesitatingly,
she came up to him and gave him her hand
standing on her toes to give him the kiss of life....

Mother paused one last time
before she gazed gently at me
enveloping me in her warmth
and then, let go...

Pause- the magical moment between reflection and deed.

21 comments:

gautami tripathy said...

Touched by it...

nothingness

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Thanks Gauthami....

steerforth said...

"Pause- the magical moment between reflection and deed." An excellent definition indeed!

Ramesh Sood said...

This is pretty heart warming.. liked it, Shail..

razzamadazzle said...

What a touching poem! So very nice.

Teresa

Hope said...

i love it! very touching
thank you

Jingle Poetry said...

you nailed it.
love the imagery.

Harshad mehta said...

Well caught the moments.

Reflections said...

Wonderful imagery enhancing those magic moments.

ρομπερτ said...

Heart felt measurment of time. Impressed.

Please have a good new week.

daily athens

Sounds of Subtlety..:) said...

shorter,sweeter and more emphatic than what the quantum of words convey...Amazing piece...:)

Geraldine said...

A beautiful love poem, unique!

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Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Thanks James. Nice that you liked that definition of pause. Pause is like that...

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Thanks Ramesh. Nice that you enjoyed the poem. Yours was nice too....

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Thanks Teresa. Nice that you loved the composition....

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Thanks Hope. I look forward to your lovely comments:)

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Thanks Jingle. Your poetry and blogs are inspiring...

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Thanks Hope. I look forward to your lovely comments:)

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

you nailed it.
love the imagery.

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

"Pause- the magical moment between reflection and deed." An excellent definition indeed!

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

shorter,sweeter and more emphatic than what the quantum of words convey...Amazing piece...:)