She paused as he approached her
slowly taking her soft gentle hand
in his strong embracing one
to clasp forever.....
He paused as she walked towards him
hesitatingly,
she came up to him and gave him her hand
standing on her toes to give him the kiss of life....
Mother paused one last time
before she gazed gently at me
enveloping me in her warmth
and then, let go...
Pause- the magical moment between reflection and deed.
21 comments:
Touched by it...
nothingness
Thanks Gauthami....
"Pause- the magical moment between reflection and deed." An excellent definition indeed!
This is pretty heart warming.. liked it, Shail..
What a touching poem! So very nice.
Teresa
i love it! very touching
thank you
you nailed it.
love the imagery.
Well caught the moments.
Wonderful imagery enhancing those magic moments.
Heart felt measurment of time. Impressed.
Please have a good new week.
daily athens
shorter,sweeter and more emphatic than what the quantum of words convey...Amazing piece...:)
A beautiful love poem, unique!
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Thanks James. Nice that you liked that definition of pause. Pause is like that...
Thanks Ramesh. Nice that you enjoyed the poem. Yours was nice too....
Thanks Teresa. Nice that you loved the composition....
Thanks Hope. I look forward to your lovely comments:)
Thanks Jingle. Your poetry and blogs are inspiring...
Thanks Hope. I look forward to your lovely comments:)
you nailed it.
love the imagery.
"Pause- the magical moment between reflection and deed." An excellent definition indeed!
shorter,sweeter and more emphatic than what the quantum of words convey...Amazing piece...:)
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