My moods reflect my thoughts
and decide they'd rather
take a hasty stroll
instead of hurting inside
the confines of a pensive soul.
Frustrated feelings
make failed attempts
at climbing castles of fortitude
only to drown into welcoming whirlpools
of wisely tempered forgiveness.
Verse overflows from the scaffolds
of emotion let loose
by a heart willing to scatter
all that holds it together -
rusted reins of ravaging sensation.
18 comments:
lovely..
"only to drown into welcoming whirlpools
of wisely tempered forgiveness."
Loved it :-)
your imagination is super elegant,
love the image on top,
and your poem is perfectly fun to read...
Thanks a ton for linking up with potluck week 10...
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/16/moods-are-like-dark-woods-4-potluck-week-10/
award/treats to claim. enjoy!
i really like your representation of different moods.
Thanks FiveLoaf.Glad you liked the poem...
Thanks Raajii. Nice you liked the lines in the poem..
Thanks Jingle. The pleasure is always mine, to be able to compose something even when time is eluding me...
Thanks gnarlyoak. The prompt was such, very close to what we go through....
"let loose by a heart willing to scatter all that holds it together"...very well written. "Rusted reins of ravaging sensation" That's a lovely new way of putting it. I love your writing. :-)
love your blog,
your poetry adds warmth and love to the blogging universe.
keep shining.
Pefectly lovely ... the pools of wisely tempered forgiveness ... really touching. Thank you!
I'm here from last week's Poetry Potluck. On Sunday Rally Dispatch this a.m. on the Jingle Poetry site, I challenged folks to visit ten of our poet bloggers today and say "hello" for World Hello Day. I'm out now doing it myself. - Suspect I'll be the only one. LOL! - I saw you toward the end of the line of links and thinking you might not have received as many views and comments as others. Hope that won't deter your participation this week.
Jamie Dedes
Your poetry is fabulous...
Always, your support is valued and your efforts are counted...We love you as a poet, we love your poetry as inspirations to all of us.
Hope to see you at our week 11 potluck.. it is open now.
Keep your talent coming.
xoxox
Thanks Kind Spirit. Good, with you liking what I write I can continue writing till eternity..
Thanks Jingle. The very fact that a person is loved as a poet speaks volumes of creativity per se and the person/s giving that love...
Hi Jamie. So sweet of you to do this. Yes, encouragement helps for all writers. But the main motto should be to write come what may.
Thanks.
Your poetry is fabulous...
Always, your support is valued and your efforts are counted...We love you as a poet, we love your poetry as inspirations to all of us.
Hope to see you at our week 11 potluck.. it is open now.
Keep your talent coming.
xoxox
http://jingleyanqiu.wordpress.com/2010/11/17/thursday-poets-rally-week-33-november-18-24/
Welcome attending poets rally week 33, link in a poem, visit 18 poets, done,
Poetry awards assigned upon completion.
Happy Friday!
Thanks in advance for the attention!
xxx
"only to drown into welcoming whirlpools
of wisely tempered forgiveness."
Loved it :-)
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