Wednesday, December 1, 2010

Part of the Cosmos


Part of the cosmos
I lie untended to
like all creation-
plants, creatures and all.

Or, is it my innate ego
prompting me 
to arrogantly presume
that this hi-fi adult
needs attention?


Isn't creation 
alive and kicking
working diligently
without any aid 


from
 I, Me, Myself?

11 comments:

Shashidhar Sharma said...

I liked it Shail... Its so beautifully self realising... I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing..


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Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...

you open my eyes,
what a creative and theme related entry.
masterful job!
Thanks for flying with potluck poetry.
Happy Wednesday!

Anonymous said...

AWESOME!! Little do we realize that we are but a part of this vast creation, and that everything has equal importance here!

Really beautifully written, Shail!! Hats off to you on this one!

Purvi said...

Interesting relaisation..!

Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...

Potluck week 12 awards/treats, Enjoy

Happy Friday!
See you next time

Anonymous said...

So beautiful, thank you for sharing! Enjoyed the words very much!

Sherry Blue Sky said...

Profoundly wise.

Olivia said...

Very thought provoking Shail!!
Thanks a bunch for sharing this one.. :)

Love xox

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Very thought provoking Shail!!
Thanks a bunch for sharing this one.. :)

Love xox

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

Potluck week 12 awards/treats, Enjoy

Happy Friday!
See you next time

Shail Raghuvanshi said...

you open my eyes,
what a creative and theme related entry.
masterful job!
Thanks for flying with potluck poetry.
Happy Wednesday!