I was most struck by the 'mother' stanza. I remember feeling like that about my mother, but it's been so many years since I lived at home with her. I suspect that when that invisible cord is finally cut by the grim reaper, I'll realise how much was still remaining of that feeling.
I love this - especially about the mother. I miss my mother so much since she's been gone over 7 years now. I feel like I was just getting to know her well when she succumbed to Alzheimers. Lovely poem.
My mother- her absence is most felt now that she is no longer there in this world. Try to make the most out of her living presence otherwise you are left with too many 'ifs and buts.' Thanks.
Did you write this?? Wow. It is simply beautiful.I love this poem! But it makes me not know what to say! I'm just a cat. It's my turn tblog this week. Purrs, Sara Cat Sara Cat's ABC-Wd-rd7-W
Did you write this? It is simply beautiful! I love this poem! But I am just a very small ordinary house cat. It's my turn to blog this week. Purrs, Sara Cat Sara Cat's ABC-Wd-rd7-W
I have written this one down by hand to remember it. I have written your name and site address too. I won't use it. I just like reading it. You have struck something very important here. You have succeeded in describing the impossible to describe - love. Purrs, Sara Cat Sara Cat's ABC-Wd-rd7-W
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Beautiful! I am speechless.
Thanks Smita. Nice you liked the composition.
some great philosopher once said, "all you need is love. love is all you need."
ROG< ABC WEDNESDAY team
Lovely words and keeps you thinking !!
nice...take the relationships out of our life and what are we left with? not much i would say...
I was most struck by the 'mother' stanza. I remember feeling like that about my mother, but it's been so many years since I lived at home with her. I suspect that when that invisible cord is finally cut by the grim reaper, I'll realise how much was still remaining of that feeling.
I love this - especially about the mother. I miss my mother so much since she's been gone over 7 years now. I feel like I was just getting to know her well when she succumbed to Alzheimers. Lovely poem.
Hi Roger,
Yes, very true. All we need in the world is indeed love but people are not very generous with that emotion.
Thanks for dropping by.
Hi Nanka,
Nice you like the poem and that it made you think...
Hi Brian,
True, not much we are left with without our relationships but that's what we literally do when we become insensitive at times....
Hi Jay,
My mother- her absence is most felt now that she is no longer there in this world. Try to make the most out of her living presence otherwise you are left with too many 'ifs and buts.'
Thanks.
Hi Leslie,
Sad to hear about your mother. My mother passed away around 4 years back and the pain still hurts so I can understand and that too with Alzheimers!
Wishing you strength.
Thanks for sharing your feelings here Leslie.
Hi Shail,
I liked this one very much.
Thanks a lot.
Hari
Hi Hari.
It is always nice to find you out here and read your comment.
Nice that you liked the poem.
Did you write this?? Wow. It is simply beautiful.I love this poem!
But it makes me not know what to say!
I'm just a cat. It's my turn tblog this week.
Purrs,
Sara Cat
Sara Cat's ABC-Wd-rd7-W
Did you write this? It is simply beautiful! I love this poem!
But I am just a very small ordinary house cat.
It's my turn to blog this week.
Purrs,
Sara Cat
Sara Cat's ABC-Wd-rd7-W
I have written this one down by hand to remember it. I have written your name and site address too. I won't use it. I just like reading it.
You have struck something very important here. You have succeeded in describing the impossible to describe - love.
Purrs,
Sara Cat
Sara Cat's ABC-Wd-rd7-W
Dear Sara
I am glad you liked this poem of mine. Yes, I did write it. We all are ordinary house cats!
Will check out the link for sure.
Thanks.
So sweet of you SaraCat. Your sweet sounding mews regarding my poem have made me feel real good.
Thanks.
Purrs to you too:)
Shail
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