Timeless waves
hurtle my path
strewn with the ravages of
panting pace
unleashed, wild, knifed
knowing not
where it goes....
I endure it all
just as the patient space of existence
bears with me in spite
of all my immature acts
of vanity and vice.
A friendly relationship of give and take -
You endure me and I do too.....
12 comments:
Despite all you live and grow and endure. Very nice.
Wonderfully done.
endurance is a hard thing to achieve..... well written and beautifully expressed !!!
Hi Teri,
Thanks so much for your nice comment. Yes, we all must learn to endure.....Not easy but not impossible either.
Thanks Premi. Glad you like the piece of verse.
Thanks Jyoti. Indeed, endurance is hard to achieve as you rightly said. Shakes you to your roots.
Beautifully written.... especially the zest you get after you endure the bliss of life. It's indeed not easy but after attaining you get everything.
Keep Writing.
Yes, we all endure each other at times. Enjoyed this
Thanks Sheila. Yes, enduring isn't easy but the Almighty gives us the strength. Don't you think so?
Hi Aankeet. Thanks. Nice that you enjoyed reading the poem and appreciate the sentiment behind it..
Wild thoughts...of vanity and vice! One can endure yet enjoy! Nice verses Shail! Really, I like it! :)
Thanks Amity. So sweet of you. Hope to see you around here.
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