Muse, Verse n' You

Monday, January 31, 2011

13 comments:

I write 4 u said...: "portray a history
unknown, hidden,
forgotten."...lovely and true about bricks...Nice; February 1, 2011 at 2:52 AM
Katherine said...: Beautiful poem. I love how you made a profound piece out of something as simple as a brick :); February 1, 2011 at 8:32 AM
Beyniaz said...: Nice poem...unusual.
Enjoyed reading it.; February 3, 2011 at 1:41 AM
Shernaz Wadia said...: Beautiful poem, Shail. You most certainly have a poet's eyes and heart, to be able to see the exraordinary hidden behind the most mundane.; February 3, 2011 at 1:44 AM
Shailraghuvanshi said...: Thanks Beyni. The prompt was such. And writing about this theme was a challenge.; February 3, 2011 at 1:58 AM
Shailraghuvanshi said...: Thanks Shernaz. Nice you liked it. Had no way out but put on the poet's goggles on and find verse in bricks....; February 3, 2011 at 1:59 AM
Kumarendra Mallick said...: Brick has many connotations, starting from very ancient to present, is a witness to history, to civilisation, to prosperity or lack of it and many more. Nice composition, Shaili.; February 3, 2011 at 7:33 AM
Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...: love the flow.; February 3, 2011 at 3:27 PM
Bhargavi said...: Shail,
Bricks lie ignored like unsatisfied desire left to rot..
How true...!; February 4, 2011 at 7:29 AM
Shail Raghuvanshi said...: Thanks Helena. Great you liked the verse.; June 17, 2011 at 7:38 AM
Shail Raghuvanshi said...: Thanks dear Geeta. That's quite flattering...; June 17, 2011 at 7:38 AM
becca givens said...: I love old bricks ... interesting history if they could speak!!; June 19, 2011 at 5:12 PM
Shail Raghuvanshi said...: Yeah, truly. What history, what stories they would have to tell to us. Just imagine!; July 2, 2011 at 11:30 AM